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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Nominator: Rambley (talk · contribs) 18:01, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 00:14, 30 January 2025 (UTC) I'll take this[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Lead

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Image needs alt text
 Done Rambley (talk) 01:20, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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How is "Lego Feet" self titled?
Because it is.[1][2] Rambley (talk) 01:17, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Clarify that the name of the duo at the time was Lego feet Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:49, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
After the release of the self-titled album Lego Feet in 1991, their first project under the Autechre name would come with the release of Cavity Job. This kind of implies this already; it already states their first project under Autechre was Cavity Job. It also mentions Lego Feet is self-titled already, telling the reader that was the former name the duo went under. I've went ahead and added a note for Cavity Job being released later to clear up any other confusion, though. Rambley (talk) 01:55, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Section seems out of scope being more about the band then the album
It's common for articles to do this for readers who have no idea who the band is. See MOS:ALBUM or for a live example, see Selected Ambient Works Volume II. Rambley (talk) 01:17, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Production

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Looks good

Composition

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Only "electronic" is linked after its first mention. Everything else in the article only gets one link.
Assuming you mean wikilinks, I've removed that second link. Rambley (talk) 01:22, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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Note that metacritic uses a weighted average
"Average" already wikilinks to weighted averages. If you still want it to specifically say this, I can add it. Rambley (talk) 01:23, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That would be prefered because not every reader will click through Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:49, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Rambley (talk) 01:58, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

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References

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Ref 1, link to Sound on Sound for consistency
 Done Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 13, cant find Malcolm Seymour III name anywhere on the review
Weirdly not on the current version, but see here. Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 13, link Pitchfork for consistency
 Done Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 22, uses MDY date formatting while it should use DMY
Are you talking about the Gantz Graf review? Because it does use DMY formatting. So do the refs around it. Maybe I'm missing something? Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
if you look at it editing veiw it did I have fixed it as its a relatively small thing Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:51, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 24, Autechre shouldnt be capitalized in the title
 Done Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Why is Igloo Magazine reliable?
Changed to a better source. Rambley (talk) 01:29, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Spot checks don't turn up anything

Misc

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A few MOS:DASH violations but I fixed with a script
Earwig flags less then 1 percent similarity

Overall

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@Rambley: Thats what I found ping me when done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:11, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@OlifanofmrTennant Fixed what I can, a couple of comments to note though. Rambley (talk) 01:30, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
  1. ^ Segal, Dave; Zurko, Nick. "The Stranger's Alternative to Pitchfork's 50 Best IDM Albums List". The Stranger. Retrieved 30 January 2025.
  2. ^ Robb, John (8 April 2010). "Beyond The Radar: Autechre Interviewed". The Quietus. Retrieved 30 January 2025.